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Understanding Revisions in Student Writing Through Revision Graphs

verfasst von : Antonette Shibani, Simon Knight, Simon Buckingham Shum

Erschienen in: Artificial Intelligence in Education

Verlag: Springer International Publishing

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Abstract

Text revision is regarded as an important process in improving written products. To study the process of revision activity from authentic classroom contexts, this paper introduces a novel visualization method called Revision Graph to aid detailed analysis of the writing process. This opens up the possibility of exploring the stages in students’ revision of drafts, which can lead to further automation of revision analysis for researchers, and formative feedback to students on their writing. The Revision Graph could also be applied to study the direct impact of automated feedback on students’ revisions and written outputs in stages of their revision, thus evaluating its effectiveness in pedagogic contexts.

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Metadaten
Titel
Understanding Revisions in Student Writing Through Revision Graphs
verfasst von
Antonette Shibani
Simon Knight
Simon Buckingham Shum
Copyright-Jahr
2018
DOI
https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-319-93846-2_62